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Specification Review: Nightingale-class Cruiser (Medical) - Review OPEN Until August 10, 2020
Posted by Lindsay Bayes in Specification Review: Nightingale-class Cruiser (Medical) - Review OPEN Until August 10, 2020
Posted by Brandon Irvine in Specification Review: Nightingale-class Cruiser (Medical) - Review OPEN Until August 10, 2020
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TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Dimensions & Structure:
* Length: 350 meters
* Beam (Width): 116.67 meters
* Height: 73 meters
* Decks: 15 (10 decks in primary hull, 8 decks in the secondary hull with 3 that overlap, listed separately)So smaller in length and width compared with the McCoy, but ~50% taller… and nearly 10x the crew? I’d make it bigger, but that’s just me.
Crew Complement:
* Officers and Crew: 350
** Command: 7
** Engineering: 34
** Medical: 50
** Mental Health: 3
** Science: 35
** Security: 21
* Visiting Personnel: 200
* Maximum Evacuation Limit: 6000The medical staff size has already been touched on by a prior reviewer, but I will agree that if you’re aiming for honest “mobile hospital” that should be larger. Right now it’s “mobile well-staffed clinic.” Unless the “50” for medical staff refers to the core crew, and most if not all of the 200 “visiting personnel” are intended to be temporary medics brought on at the start of a mission to bulk up the staff for the situation they’re heading into?
Also, related to my comment above about the dimensions: if I’m having a hard time imagining this ship being able to support 10x the crew of a McCoy, I definitely can’t see it supporting 12x the Max Evac Limit.
SHIP IMAGE
https://imgur.com/4tA1m7BI do like that, particularly the attention to detail with the nacelles and showing how they can bend.
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CONCLUSION
The Nightingale-class is a state-of-the-art mobile hospital that is not only adaptable but can provide other essential services as a front-line Starfleet vessel. Its ability to be flexible allows it to provide vital emergency response across the Federation (and beyond) and serves as a responsive training environment.
SUBMITTED 10/07/2020 (DD-MM-YYYY)
Lindsay Bayes, Cale Reilly, Nicholas VillarealMy personal opinion is I would like it to be bigger in general. I don’t think you necessarily need to add decks to accomplish this, but I think it needs about a third more space to be seen as a legitimate upgrade over the McCoy, while also having the crew staffing and evacuation numbers make more sense.
-Flt. Capt. Brandon Irvine
Senior DesignerI’ve fixed the typos/word changes where necessary and put in all the comments people have made into our working doc. We’ll be discussing the changes needed. Thank you for your feedback!
~Linds
Also, a thing I realized is that the visiting personnel count got included into the total Officers and Crew count by mistake (we originally started out with a much smaller ship in design). If we increase the ship size as suggested, I can agree that the crew would increase accordingly, but it would be above the 350 that was intended to be officers and crew. With the changes to include a psychiatry ward, I think we can make the personnel side of this make much more sense!
~Linds