Posted by Cadet John Malcom (Scientist) in COS’s office Cadet Malcom reporting for duty.
I took a deep breath as I entered the office.

“Hello Cadet Malcom.” said lt. Alison Barr. “I see you are rather young to be exepted into Star Fleet.”

Y-Yes sir. I barely joined Star fleet when I was called here,sir.”

“Your duties will vary from the simple to the dangerous starting now. Now go get your physical.”

OOC: First off, welcome!

A couple of quick things to go over. First, very much discourage posting for another persons character. You don’t know how we would respond, and in this case, there is more to our normal checking in then what you posted here.

Second, a couple of quick style pointers. We post in third person, so all he/she/theirs/character name, etc. Think like reading a book. Feel free to take a second to read over your posts, don’t feel like you have to rush through a post. For example you missed a quotation. And at the end of your post, make sure to sign off with your name and position. For example I would sign off with:

Lt Barr - CSO

Finally, feel free to expand on your posts. What is your character thinking? How did they get to where they are? Describe what they are seeing, emotions, anything you can think of. Once again, we are telling a story here.

Hope that helps! Please re-write your intro post so I can meet your character!

Steve

PS: You would also be in the wrong office. :-D (COS = Chief of Security, CSO = Chief Science Officer)