USS Challenger
Main Sickbay - Medical eval. (Cadet Linton)
Posted by Cadet Abbot Linton (Engineer) in Main Sickbay - Medical eval. (Cadet Linton)
Posted by Lieutenant Seraphina Walsh (Chief Medical Officer) in Main Sickbay - Medical eval. (Cadet Linton)
Posted by Cadet Abbot Linton (Engineer) in Main Sickbay - Medical eval. (Cadet Linton)
Abbot had been on the Challenger for just under 1 hour. And he had managed To memorize The entire ship map. “well time to my check-up” he’d think to himself
He’d walk to a Turbolift and say “sickbay” (he’d arrive at sickbay)
“hi, I am here for my Medical eval.”OOC: Howdy Sam! I’m going to give some of my med cadets time on whether they want to grab this, if not, in a day or two, I’ll respond, alright? :)
-Kat
OOC:Ok, thanks. :)
OOC: Welcome Sam! Just some quick tips on your first post. First, make sure to sign off on your posts. Typically we do rank, name and position, so I would use “Lt Sapeth - CE”. Second, on your writing itself there are a couple things to keep in mind. We write like how you would expect to read a book, so third person, past tense. Example “He walked into the turbolift and said, “Sickbay.” (And you can even expand on the arriving in sickbay as well. “After a quick Turbolift ride he arrived outside sickbay…”) Also take a second to double check punctuation and capitalization. We aren’t super picky on grammar, but it does help people when they are reading your posts stay in the flow.
Hope that helps some! Look forward to posting with you!
Steve